पारिवार उस धागे की तरहा होता है जिसमे रिश्तो की छोटी-छोटी गाँठ होती हैं जिसने उन रिश्तेरुपी गाँठो को समझ लिया ।तो उस धागे में जीवनपर्यन्त कभी भी कोई गाँठ लग ही नहीं सकती ।।
Baat baat PR aapa khone ki aadat thi tumhary. Terry hr glty ko apni glty mankr tujhe mana lete the hm or fir se hmary jindagi ke there sath spne saja lete the hm kya pta tha kuchh eisa kroge or chahoge tum warna tery khushi ke liye khud ko tujhse KB ka dur kr lete hm…
ma'am it's really awesome.. these are not just lines this is the replica of a girls life who have to leave everything all relations only because of your husband.. it touched my heart deeply nd will touch everyone's heart who have a heart.. it's my life story too..but just to emphasize on one thing ma'am.. no doubt that a girls go through all this but in the long run its just the "Child" who suffers.
Adbhut………….."❤️ touching
Bar bar minnate ki tumse
Par tuje to jara si bhi hamdardi nhi thi mujse
Nice line mem
Teri galti par bhi har bar tuje hi manane aate the hum,
Kabhi tum bhi hame manao
Hamesa se ye hasrat thi hamari !
The sad reality 😔 .very nice maam👌
बहुत ही अच्छे शब्दों में दिल के दर्द को बया किया अपने जो बिती हर बात आईने में दिखने लगे आज बिखरे रह पन्ने पलटने लगी
isliye intercast love marriage jaruri hai..husband se pyaar jaruri hai.
everyone needs love
Shandar Jabardast Jindabad 👍👍👍
awsome. very true 👍👍👍👍👌👌👌👌
पारिवार उस धागे की तरहा होता है जिसमे रिश्तो की छोटी-छोटी गाँठ होती हैं जिसने उन रिश्तेरुपी गाँठो को समझ लिया ।तो उस धागे में जीवनपर्यन्त कभी भी कोई गाँठ लग ही नहीं सकती ।।
😣😣😣😣
My Dil me chupe saare baat aapki poetry se Bahar aagayi aur jispe gujrati ye un logonko Pata Hai kitni baar Mar Mar ke jeete Hai is samaj me
Ma'am ,,, main life mein asi poetry khe nhi Sunni ,,, aapki poetry ki har ek line Dil me Ghar kar gyi ,,, Aankhen Nam Ho gayi…🙏🙏
Kmal kr diya mam, Dil ko chhu gai
G TALKS
ROCK ON ❣❤❣
Rulaa diya
nice yrrr….
Baut baut achi performance. G talk par goonj mam k alawa phli baar kisi ki performance muje itni psand aayi
Baat baat PR aapa khone ki aadat thi tumhary. Terry hr glty ko apni glty mankr tujhe mana lete the hm or fir se hmary jindagi ke there sath spne saja lete the hm kya pta tha kuchh eisa kroge or chahoge tum warna tery khushi ke liye khud ko tujhse KB ka dur kr lete hm…
Exellent
wahhh
Super
ma'am it's really awesome.. these are not just lines this is the replica of a girls life who have to leave everything all relations only because of your husband.. it touched my heart deeply nd will touch everyone's heart who have a heart.. it's my life story too..but just to emphasize on one thing ma'am.. no doubt that a girls go through all this but in the long run its just the "Child" who suffers.
Very nice di 👍
Wowwwwww
Keep it you 🤩🤘
Awesome mam nd congrats for ur first poetry ….. 😄😄😄😄😄