97. Governments should not spend on arts such as painting and music   agree or disagree

97. Governments should not spend on arts such as painting and music agree or disagree



I am Kirin marker and today I am going to discuss with you an academic IELTS essay which has been seen on 9th May 2015 in Australia a very similar s is there in my book at number 302 the topic that came in Australia is that governments should focus their spending on public services rather than on arts such as music and painting to what extent do you agree or disagree and the essay which is there in the book is many people think arts like painting and music cannot directly improve people's quality of life and therefore the government should spend money on other things do you agree or disagree so it is a quite a similar essay actually everything that has to be written in this essay has to be written in that essay so basically both essays are the same introduction some people argue that arts like painting and music fail to directly improve people's quality of life and consequently government should allocate money on other things like infrastructure to promote people's quality of life however I disagree with this view in this and say I will explain why I think that arts can directly improve people's quality of life and that the government should spend money on them and I can change according to to the today's topic this can be changed a little bit in this essay I will explain why I think that arts such as music and painting is essential for people you is as essential for people as as other public services first paragraph the advantages of spending money on arts cannot be overlooked the arts clearly make people's lives better to begin with the arts give us immense joy and relaxation consider listening to a beautiful song sitting on the sofa after a whole day's work it really relieves the diet nests and we feel rejuvenated paintings photographs and other pictures add color to our lives and often inspire people to create works of art of their own I am not only thinking of artistic works produced by renowned artists but also those produced by children for their parents to attach to refrigerators using magnets furthermore the arts like music and painting are part of our culture and give identity to the country arts also bring people together by appreciating arts individuals from different parts of the nation could feel connected and related moreover arts like music and painting can help us express our emotions it is a basic human need to be able to express ourselves art is what differentiates us from animals as humans most of us need an outlet for our creative and emotional needs and the best way to express this is through arts like music and painting so in these two paragraphs I have written why arts and painting are a set arts such as music and painting are essential for people first is they give us immense immense means too much too much joy immense means too much that is a huge vast enormous and relaxation is rest and rejuvenated rejuvenated is bringing back to life again is revived charged refreshed revitalized re-energized so these are the difficult words reknowned is famous and then the other things and no difficult word in this differentiating means makes us different from and separates separates and then one better I have made on other things many people feel that government should spend money only on certain things such as defense health and education whilst I agree that these things are important I think that government should be able to find a little money to spend on arts not only because they raise our quality of life but because they can remind us of our heritage and show the world what kind of country and people we are so in this paragraph I have given the opponent's view and then I have sort of again come back to my own view that money should be spent on the arts to sum up our government is responsible for improving the quantity of people's lives both physically and spiritually therefore proper amount of money should be allocated wisely on arts only by this can we progress our society in a more balanced and more sustainable way sustainable means our long lasting and maintainable supportable be arable justifiable so you can put any other word also and physically spiritually spiritually means sort of mentally here it means morally mentally morally so this is this is the essay and this is the plan I followed in this essay interaction I have to agreed then benefits of art more benefits opponents view and then conclusion reiterate opinion so that is si I hope you've enjoyed it thank you very much

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